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Following in Beyoncé's 'Single Ladies' Footsteps Strips 7-year-olds of Innocence

By Sarah Kaufman
Washington Post Staff Writer
Saturday, May 15, 2010

blog singleladies 300x225 Why the Seven Year Olds Single Ladies Video was So WrongWatch The Commentary from The Early Show on ABC by Clicking on the Link below.



Following in Beyoncé's 'Single Ladies' Footsteps Strips 7-year-olds of Innocence

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By Sarah Kaufman
Washington Post Staff Writer
Saturday, May 15, 2010
The signs are all there: The hip-grinding come-ons. Legs kicked up to the ear. Skin-baring lingerie.
This particular video remake of Beyoncé's hit "Single Ladies" follows a rubric of raunchy moves straight out of the pole-dance manual.
But the performers, according to published reports, are 7-year-olds.
Their satin-and-lace hooker look screams Lolita. The whole two-minute display seems one crotch-shot short of illegal.
And with nearly 2 million hits, the clip of five enthusiastically gyrating grade-schoolers (dubbed "Little Girls Going Hard on Single Ladies") taped at the World of Dance competition in Pomona, Calif., last month has gone viral.
We could get child psychologists on the phone to opine about what a bad thing this is, to shed light on the vulnerable 7-year-old psyche and the crucial development of a girl's sense of self at that age. But we know what they would say: That global girldom needs more emphasis on intellect and independence, not less. That being cheered on for dressing and moving like strippers teaches girls a disturbing, belittling lesson. And that's what's so bewildering about this video: We know it's wrong. Didn't their parents know it was wrong?
It isn't prudish to think 7-year-olds ought to look like 7-year-olds. It's prudent. Twisted minds are surely drooling over the exhibitionism of the Beyoncé bunch. Pedophiles don't need more kindling on their deranged fires, but displays like this one shovel it on. And put other little girls at risk.
What's troubling here is more than just the moves these kids are making -- it's the element of adult manipulation behind them. Sexy children, pushy parents: Think back on JonBenet Ramsey, the rouged and blow-dried beauty pageant princess, dead at 6. The irony is that kiddie pageants back then -- she was killed in 1996 -- were undoubtedly tamer than some of them are nowadays, with skimpy attire and dirty dancing all the rage. (Look at the one depicted in the 2006 film "Little Miss Sunshine," in which Abigail Breslin's young character performs a striptease.) Same thing on certain dance competition circuits -- like the one that launched this video.
I watch this bunch of energetic 7-year-olds and wish that, with those kicks and their apparent athleticism, they were outside on a soccer field, enjoying a sport that focuses on play -- and not so much on the body.
I have a 7-year-old daughter, and her passion at the moment is turning perfect cartwheels, playing baseball and inventing dramatic scenarios for her collection of tiny plastic animals. Peer pressure doesn't seem to be an issue yet, but then again, most of her friends are into the same things -- gymnastics, storytelling, inventive play. Happily, my daughter seems to have a view of herself that has nothing to do with starlet underdressing, sexuality beyond her years or the latest trend in music videos.
Will this always be the case? I can only say I hope so -- and I know for sure that one way to grow a head case with low self-esteem and a body-image problem is to plunk her in front of music videos that hype sex appeal and tell girls their greatest asset is that thing they're sitting on.
Of course, the Beyoncé Five have gone a whole lot of steps beyond just watching the grown-up moves. I'm impressed by their flexibility and clean execution. But at the same time I wonder, what kind of dance teachers (paid by the parents) drilled them for hours and hours in the chilly perfection of a routine that feels so exploitative of their energy, innocence and charm? Soon enough, these girls, like girls everywhere, will have to navigate tricky adolescent waters, learning to dodge what's unsafe and unwise, and finding out what true power, self-respect and individuality look like.
This performance gives them a big shove in the wrong direction.
Want to see the entire dance routine?  Then view the video below.

Response Directions:
1.) Discuss your first reaction to the dancers.
2.) Then discuss your reaction to the opinions from the commentators from The Early Show on ABC and/or the commentary from the article above by weaving in citations from either source.  A good way to do this is to think about something they said that you either agree with or disagree with and then use their quote as a springboard.  After you agree or disagree with something they've said, then explain why.  Be mindful to choose quotes that support your reaction to the video so that your response will represent one unit of interrelated ideas that form a well-bodied paragraph.  Remember, if you introduce a new idea into your response, then you need to create a new paragraph. 
To receive credit for this assignment you must cite something, either directly or by summarizing or by paraphrasing. 
MLA Citation Guidlines:
You must show proper citations by placing direct quotes within quotation marks followed by a parenthesis indicating the source of the quote.  If you are summarizing or paraphrasing, then you must follow the last word of your summary or paraphrase with a parenthesis that has the name of the television show or the name of the author who wrote the article above..  Then close the parenthesis followed by a period.

Examples:
I.Cite The Early Show commentators by doing this:
While some claim that: “ . . . . . . . . . …ya-ta-dah, ya ta dah . . . . . .” (The Early Show).
II.
I have a hard time agreeing with the concept that,"  . . . . . . .ya-ta-dah, ya-ta-dah . . . . "(Kaufman).
III.Show a summary or citation like this:
In fact, one of the news commentators compares the dance routine to cheerleading (The Early Show).

Please pay attention to where you place the period after a citation.  In short quotes, summaries, or paraphrases, it always comes after the clsoing parenthesis.
Your response to me is due by Friday, August 19th.  You must include a citation in order to receive
credit.
Your response to two of your classmates is due by Sunday, August 21st.


66 comments:

  1. Dear ms. Carlson,
    According to her article, she claims that “The whole two-minute display seems one crotch-shot short of illegal.” and I agree with that up to a certain point. Being apart of the world of dance I know that these sort of dance routens and costumes are acceptable. I’m not saying that I would let my little sister dance this way but who can deny that this sort of thing is all around us. You can’t turn on your tv without the fear of what you might see. A majority of todays entertainment world showcases women grinding and shaking whatever they got. If these girls were 17 instead of 7 people wouldn’t think twice about it, there is no law by my knowledge that states how a person can dance at an specified age. People are saying that this is degrading to the little girls, well most advertizements in america are degrading towards women. You try tell a kid not to do something that they see another person do on tv. In fact, one of the news commentators compares the dance routine to cheerleading (The Early Show). Yes what these girls did is abit risky but if we stop looking at the negative aspects of the dance people would really see just how talented these girls are. I say children keep dancing but cover up next time.
    Sincerely,
    Jaxey pd.6

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  2. Dear Ms. Carlson

    My initial response to the dancers is how on Earth did the dance instructors convince their parents to let their girls dance in those outfits, even in the original music video by Beyonce, the outfits weren’t as revealing as these. I also kind of agree that “Didn't their parents know it was wrong?” (Kaufman). I agree with this because how could they not know it was wrong to let those girls dance in those outfits.

    Sincerely,
    Spenser T.

    Period 6.

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  3. Dear Jaxey,

    I agree with you in several areas. I do agree that the girls have some degree of talent (and I’m not saying this in a perverted way), and in some aspects it is similar to cheerleading. However I also agree that next time they should just cover up, just so that they wouldn’t be accused of showing a bad example.

    Sincerely,
    Spenser T.

    Period 6

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  5. Dear Ms. Carlson,
    My first reaction to the blog, was that the girls are to young to be doing stripper dance moves. I agree with the article when its says "I watch this bunch of energetic 7-year-olds and wish that, with those kicks and their apparent athleticism, they were outside on a soccer field, enjoying a sport that focuses on play -- and not so much on the body"(Kaufman). I agree with this because young athletic girls should not be using their ability to do stripper routines. They should be kicking balls or running track.

    Sincerely,
    Derek Yamane

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  6. Dear Jaxey,
    I agree with what you said. children should keep dancing but, next time cover up.

    Sincerely,
    Derek Yamane

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  7. Dear Spencer,
    I agree with what you said. The instructor must having been convincing to the parents so the children could dance in those outfits.

    Sincerely,
    Derek Yamane

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  8. Dear Mrs. Carlson,

    To me I think at this age of childhood these girls are dressing way too inappropriate. I really don't know how the parents agreed to let their own child dress like this. Personally I would be embarrassed if this was my own daughter. I agree with "we know it's wrong"(Kaufman). The reason to agreeing with this phrase is that it is wrong at that age to dance in that type of costumes.

    Sincerely, Ken Miyata

    Period 5

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  9. Dear Derek Yamane,

    I agree with your statement on that these 7 year old girls should be on the field playing soccer.

    Sincerely,
    Ken Miyata

    Period 5

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  10. Dear Spencer T.

    I agree with the statement that you picked out “Didn't their parents know it was wrong?”(Kaufman). I agree with this because the parents and their knowledge they should know better

    Sincerely, Ken Miyata

    Period 5

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  11. Dear Ms.Carlson

    Once i pressed play to watch the video, i thought i was on the wrong website but i figured it out. But anyways, i thought that the video was very entertaining to me and it was really fun to watch. But as for a lot of other people, it may seem very inappropriate. Yes it may seem as if they are too young to be wearing that kind of clothing but its not really up to those people to tell them what to wear. Their parents probably wanted them to just enjoy what they want to do but most importantly, enjoy what they love to do. Now i dont think any parent would want to stop their child from doin what they would love to do and besides the kids are only 7 years of age, i dont think its that bad.
    But i totally agree on this passage:I watch this bunch of energetic 7-year-olds and wish that, with those kicks and their apparent athleticism, they were outside on a soccer field, enjoying a sport that focuses on play -- and not so much on the body. (Kaufman)

    Sincerely,
    Lina Fifita

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  12. Dear Mrs. Carlson,
    I agree with Sarah Kaufman's aritcle because girls as well as everyone should be able to express themselves however they want but onlt to a certain degree. Sarah proves the point that you can't know what kind of people are watching or what it could encourage them to do when she says "It's prudent. Twisted minds are surely drooling over the exhibitionism of the Beyoncé bunch. Pedophiles don't need more kindling on their deranged fires, but displays like this one shovel it on. And put other little girls at risk." It's things like this that encourage the wrong things.
    Sincerely Anthony Pd.6

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  13. Dear Spencer T.,
    I also agree with your comment “Didn't their parents know it was wrong?”(Kaufman). Their parents are responsible for them because of their age, and no kid, no matter the age should be dancing dressed liked that on national T.V.
    Sincerely Anthony Pd.6

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  14. Dear Derek Yamane,
    I agree with your statement that girls shouldn't be dancing like strippers especially young 7-year-old ones. They should be doing sports if they are that energetic like you said.
    Sincerely Anthony Pd.6

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  15. Dear Ms.Carlson,
    my first reaction to this video was wow!Some people think "its bizzare, but i see bizzare things everyday"(The Early Show). I agree with this because i feel that people are overreacting. Its just dancing. Sincerely, Lawson Fernandes Pd 5.

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  16. Dear Lina Fifita

    I strongly agree with you because even though they are only seven years old doesnt mean they cant do what they love. I know that there clotheing is innapropriate but other then that you shouldnt hate on them because how many 7 year old do you know that can do that??
    Sincerely Syndreck dsio pd.2

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  17. Dear Anthony,
    I agree with your statement that girls should be able to express themselves only to a certain degree. Sincerely, Lawson Fernandes Pd 5.

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  18. Dear Lina,
    I agree with your comment that those guirls should use that energy in sports and other activities that dancing like that. Sincerely, Lawson Fernandes Pd 5.

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  19. Dear Ms.Carlson, These kids are awesome dancers! They rock! Sincerely, Lawson Fernandes Pd 5.

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  20. Dear Mrs. Carlson,

    The first thought that went through my mind was "What the heck is going on? Why in the world are little girls dancing like strippers?" My mind went completely blank as I saw this. It just wasn't right to see something like this happen to little girls even if it was for a dance competition. I just can't understand why little girls would dance in such a way.

    Just like in The Early Show, I was slightly disturbed by what had gone on with the video. It just isn't something you should see little girls dance to. The outfit was almost like it was designed for a stripper and that just doesn't sit well with me. They said that this is just more oil to fuel the fire for pedophiles (The Early Show). In my opinion, it is. It can't be right on how little girls are dancing like that and that it should just stay with the older people as to protect their innocence (The Early Show).

    Sincerly,
    Jessica "Sora" Pasadava of Period 2

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  21. Dear spencer,
    Thank you for seeing my point. All these girls have to do is cover up and thatb would be the end of that. I too am curious how the parents even agreed to the outfit choices, perhaps the just looked at it in the same way as cheerleaders outfits. Well what's done is done no changing that.
    Sincerely,
    Jaxeyc pd6

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  22. Dear lawson,
    I agree strange things do happen every day, and I do think that some people are over reacting abit but I can see where they're coming from. However over reacting won't change what happened, what happened happened and there's nothing you can do about it. Now that these girls know the conciquences of there action they'll think twice before dancing in revealing outfits.
    Sincerely,
    Jaxey pd6

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  23. Dear Anthony Aiwohi,

    I’m glad to know that you agree with some of my viewpoints. However I do agree with your one point that girls at their age should be able to express themselves but only up to a certain point, because they are not at the time and age to express such feelings of sex (although I bet they were completely unaware that they were doing a few explicit moves).

    Sincerely,
    Spenser T.

    Period 6.

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  24. Dear Ms. Carlson,

    My first reaction to the video was "What on earth are parents thinking nowadays?". I liked the choreograph but just the outfits are completely inappropriate for girls that age. They could have worn something that was less revealing. I highly agreed that "We could get child psychologists on the phone to opine about what a bad thing this is"(Kaufman).

    Sincerely,
    JR Quilos

    Period 2

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  25. Dear Derek Yamane,

    I extremely agree on how you think the girls shouldn't be dancing like strippers because there are some scary people out there. You don't know what's gonna happen if you reveal yourself too much.

    Sincerely,
    JR Quilos

    Period 6

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  26. Dear Anthony Aiwohi,

    I have to disagree with you on that one. Young people should express themselves but I don't think they should do that this way. Dancing is a good way to express yourself but they shouldn't have done it in such a way that reveals their whole body too much.

    Sincerely,
    JR Quilos

    Period 6

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  27. Dear Ms. Carlson,
    When I first seen these little girls, I noticed what they're wearing and was surprised by how much they're showing because I do not dress like that myself. But as I later watched and heard what the reporters were saying I also found out that they're only seven year olds. And honestly, if I were their parents I would NOT allow any of them wear nor dance like that. I dont dance like that either.
    While some claim that "this is like child pornography" (The Early Show). According to the lady with the blue long sleeve "I don't even dance like that" (The Early Show). In fact, the older man said: "It's quite disturbing to watch" (The Early Show). I would have to say that I, Cortney Higa, agree with these reporters to this youtube video. I think that they are too young to be wearing and dancing like that. I do think that they should express themselves, but in a different way so that they aren't showing that much skin and also kicking up, or even shaking their bodies like that. For a sixteen year old who doesnt dress and dance like that, I do find it akward and disturbing just to think "what if I seen my younger cousin in that?".
    Sincerely,
    Cortney Higa (pd.4)

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  28. Dear JR Quilos,
    I agree with your statement because those outfits were way too reveling. I doubt I would even wear something like that on Halloween!!
    Sincerely,
    Cortney Higa

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  29. Dear Lawson Fernandes,
    I say that I agree with your first reaction but then disagree with saying its overreacting because to me, when I was that age, I was never exposed to people wearing and dancing in that kind of way. Although its just dancing, us older people dont even dance like that because we would find it inappropriate for younger kids. So when we do see kids dancing like that, its akward and disturbing
    With all respect,
    Cortney Higa

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  30. Dear Ms. Carlson,

    My first reaction to this video was, what kind of parents do these children have to let them dance this way? Let alone, on T.V.? I agree with the women on the Early Show that it is indeed "disturbing" (The Early Show). The way that they are dancing so seductive and with sex appeal way beyond there years is just frightening to watch.

    I agree with the article when it says "it's the element of adult manipulation behind them" (Kaufman). They must have spent hours perfecting this dance, but who was this dance teacher? To teach them such provocative dance moves? And I wonder if their parents were pushing them into doing it, or if the dance teacher had to do some major convincing. Seven year olds should be doing ballet and tap dancing, not pole dancing.

    Sincerely,
    Evangeline period 5

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  31. Dear Ms. Carlson,
    I would have to agree with the guy on the early show saying "How is this any different from cheerleaders",(Early Show). I mean why would it be different if they had matured more, that just means the girls would have had more to "swing around". If anything it is less lewd than Beyonce's original video. Tell me you haven't been walking the beach and seen a naked baby before. And what makes their dance less socially acceptable than a girl running in her bathing suit.
    I give them props for simply being able to stand up in front of thousands of people in those outfits and have enough self-confidence to perform ridiculously intense choreography almost perfectly.
    Truely,
    Khylani Noel P2

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  32. Dear Ms. Carlson,
    My first reaction was the clothes they were wearing, I don’t even dress that way myself. Then listening on to the conversation on the early show hearing that they were only seven that's ridiculous! If I were there parent I would never let my daughter dress that way or even do that. I agree with what the lady said; “I find this very disturbing” (Early Show) who are there parents? if one of those girls were my kids I would never let them do that! I also agree with the other lady when she says “it border lines child pornography” (Early Show)
    Sincerely,
    Erika pd.4

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  33. Dear Ms. Carlson,
    I agree with the man in the early show talking, claiming " how is this any diffrent from cheerleaders",( early show). To me this is spot on of what I thought, and their clothes arent that revealing. Its not like they matured yet and have things to hide, their 7 years old. Its like a bathing suit but with more fashion added,so how could that have been revealing? What about the child pagents, they have swim suit sections, so really, whats the diffrence? I thought they were pretty darn good for 7, being that they could forget the moves and all.
    Sincerely,
    Racquel Sandal (pd. 4)

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  34. Dear Khylani Noel,
    I agree with you 100%. Naked babies could be eye candy to perverts and predators,but its not. These little girls dont have much to hide,so to me its not a big deal.
    Sincerely,
    Racquel Sandal

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  35. Dear Anthony Aiwohi,
    I partially agree with you. I agree that girls (and boys) should be able to express themselves freely. When I saw this it thought it was cute,and in no was sexual. I dont see little girls trying to act grown up in anyway sexual, I actually give them props for doing their dance so well!
    Sincerely,
    Racquel Sandal

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  36. Dear Racquel,
    i agree with you, that the girls are no different from cheerleaders and how they are not even that bad at that kind of age. They are only at the age of 7 and they havent yet matured to those kind of standards, all they're doin is dancing and havin fun while they are at a young age until they actually explore the real world at the mature level.

    Sincerely,
    Lina Fifita

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  37. Dear ms. Carlson,
    According to her article, she claims that “The whole two-minute display seems one crotch-shot short of illegal.” and I agree with that up to a certain point. Being a cheerleader and having a small background of dance I have seen costumes like this before those types of costumes are chosen based on the song they are doing. It just portrays tee artist and the meaning of the song. I’m not saying that I would let my little cousins dance this way but who can deny that this sort of thing is all around us. There are young girls out in the world who wear that much clothes to school. A majority of today entertainment world showcases women grinding and shaking whatever they got. Like they are half naked and moving in all types of sexual ways. If these girls were 18 instead of 7 people wouldn’t think twice about it they wouldn’t even care, People are saying that this is degrading to the little girls, well most advertisements in America are degrading towards women. Trust me its all around. In fact, one of the news commentators compares the dance routine to cheerleading (The Early Show). Yes what these girls did is a bit risky but if we stop looking at the negative aspects of the dance people would really see just how talented these girls are. I don’t even think that I could dance like that. I say children keep dancing but have more age appropriate outfits next time.
    Sincerely,
    Alexa TJ pd.5

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  38. Dear ms. Carlson,
    According to her article, she claims that “The whole two-minute display seems one crotch-shot short of illegal.” and I agree with that up to a certain point. Being a cheerleader and having a small background of dance I have seen costumes like this before those types of costumes are chosen based on the song they are doing. It just portrays tee artist and the meaning of the song. I’m not saying that I would let my little cousins dance this way but who can deny that this sort of thing is all around us. There are young girls out in the world who wear that much clothes to school. A majority of today entertainment world showcases women grinding and shaking whatever they got. Like they are half naked and moving in all types of sexual ways. If these girls were 18 instead of 7 people wouldn’t think twice about it they wouldn’t even care, People are saying that this is degrading to the little girls, well most advertisements in America are degrading towards women. Trust me its all around. In fact, one of the news commentators compares the dance routine to cheerleading (The Early Show). Yes what these girls did is a bit risky but if we stop looking at the negative aspects of the dance people would really see just how talented these girls are. I don’t even think that I could dance like that. I say children keep dancing but have more age appropriate outfits next time.
    Sincerely,
    Alexa T pd.5

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  39. Dear Jaxey,
    I agree with you because we both have backgrounds in dancing we can see the true meaning to the dance.
    Sincerely,
    Alexa T pd.5

    Dear Raquel,
    I totally agree with what you say it is just like being at the beach with a swimsuit.
    Sincerely,
    Alexa T pd.5

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  40. Dear Ms. Carlson,
    While I think that the ability for the girls' parents to agree to them dancing in somewhat suggestive outfits and dance moves and that the dance seems a bit age-inappropriate, I think it depends on how you think of the situation.
    Some people go on to claim that "It's disturbing." (The Early Show). And that, at an adult's point of view, is understandable because the dance and outfit that's being portrayed in that act doesn't seem age appropriate for those seven year old girls.
    But you should also look at it from the girls' point of view. They are obviously terrific dancers that are showing their capability of executing routines, and in their heads they might not think that the dance or their costumes are inappropriate. They might just be thinking that they're competing with a dance that they worked hard on and put a lot of effort into.

    Sincerely,
    Carlie De Silva
    Period 2

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  41. Dear Carlie,

    I completely agree with your argument in that they are just competing and showing off their dance capabilities. I never really thought about it from this perspective, but I'm sure at their age, they don't realize that they are portraying such suggestive dance moves and outfits. I'm sure they are just having a good time and doing what they love to do. But at the same time, it seems unfair that so many people world wide are seeing so much of these little girls.

    Sincerely,
    Evangeline Cook
    Pd 5

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  42. Dear Khylani,

    Sorry, but I disagree when you say it's no different then cheer leading. Cheer leaders have a purpose, and that is to cheer people on. These girls are just encouraging other young girls to dress and dance like them. I mean, think about it, other young girls about their age are going to watch this and then want to be just like them. Not even cheer leaders dress this skimpy.

    Sincerely,
    Evangeline
    Pd. 5

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  43. Dear Mrs. Carlson,

    When I first watched this video, the first thing that popped into my head was: "Whoa, these girls are really good dancers, but what's up with the outfit?" I'm pretty sure that these 7 year old girls don't really understand what their moves and outfits are suggesting, because in their minds, they're just having fun doing what they love.

    This video has already gotten over two million views. Many people are asking, "Didn't their parents know it was wrong?" (Kaufman) I totally agree with that. If those were my daughters, I would never let them dress like that or do inappropriate dance moves like that.

    I think these girls should continue doing what they love, but next time, cover up and cut the inappropriate dance moves. They're really talented girls, and I don't think they need revealing outfits or suggestive dance moves to prove that.

    Sincerely,
    Kierstyn Oshita
    Pd. 2

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  44. Dear Jaxey,
    Totally agree with you when you said they should keep dancing but cover it up!
    Sincerely,
    Erika pd 4

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  45. Dear kierstyn,
    I agree with you when you said they should continue doing what they love but clean it up a bit, those moves and the outfit needs to change !!
    Sincerely,
    Erika pd.4

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  46. Dear Jaxey,

    I totally agree with you when you said that if we stop looking at the negative aspects of the dance, then we would see just how talented these girls really are. These girls have amazing talent, but so many people are concentrating so much on their attire that they don't even realize it.

    Sincerely,
    Kierstyn Oshita
    Pd. 2

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  47. Dear Carlie,

    I agree with you when you said that the girls themselves may be thinking that they're competing with a dance that they worked hard on and put a lot of effort into. These girls are young, and they probably don't know any better. They're just having fun doing what they love.

    Sincerely,
    Kierstyn Oshita
    Pd. 2

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  48. Dear Ms. Carlson
    My first reaction to this video was, this is terrible, they dont know how to dsnce to beyonce's song like I do. then i realized they were just 7 years old, and too yound to even be trying to do these kinds of moves, its too innapropriate. And just like they said on the tonight show, “Didn't their parents know it was wrong?”(Kaufman). This dance video wrong and everyone knows it.
    sincerely,
    Dustin Ikehara
    PD.4

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  49. Dear Dereck Yamane
    I like how you said "the girls are to young to be doing stripper dance moves." i agree with you. its not right. they should breakdance or something else.
    Sincerely
    Dustin Ikehara

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  50. Dear Kmiyata
    I agree with you when you say "To me I think at this age of childhood these girls are dressing way too inappropriate." that is true and i believe you.
    Sincerely
    Dustin Ikehara

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  51. Dear ms.Carlson
    My first reaction to this video was that they could dance really good but I then looked at the way they dressed and there age and realized it was inappropriate to be dressed like that. Then the moves the were doing were adult moves which are inapopriate for seven.

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  52. Dear kmiyata
    I agree with you when you said because I wouldn't have let my daughter do that in front of America it would be embaresing and they are to young to be dancing like that.

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  53. Dear Derek yamane
    I agree with what you said because those girls need to keep those moves were they belong which is the older girls. Also it is true they are showing there body off too much at 7.

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  54. Dear Ms.Carlson,
    My first response to this video was WOW, these girls can dance! how old are they? I must say some people have super talented kids. But the one thing i would disagree with in this video is the kids outfits. When I was their age my mom would never let me wear clothes like that!
    sincerely, Kehaulani Relacion Pd.6

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  55. Dear Spenser T,
    I totally agree with your reaction to their outfits! They are way to young.
    sincerely, Kehaulani Relacion Pd.6

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  56. Dear Derek Yamane,
    Your reaction was kinda like mine about what the kids wore. Way to young for those kinds of clothes if you ask me!
    Sincerely, Kehaulani Relacion Pd.6

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  57. Dear ms.carlson
    These young ladies are great dancers and make me want to tap my feet. They are so cute! But they look like they are wearing too provocative clothes. Someone even stated: “Didn't their parents know it was wrong?”(Kaufman). Although the clothing was kind of out there the dancers are simply too young to care.

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  58. Dear Dustin Ikehara,
    I disagree with you because those little girl
    are amazing dancers and you could not compare.
    Sincerely,
    Lilia Yamamoto pd5

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  59. Dear Erika,
    Its obvious they dress very skimpy and everyone is saying that but they are just little girls who do not know better. Their parents probably like all the attention also.
    sincerely,
    Lilia Yamamoto pd5

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  60. Dear Ms. Carlson

    My first reaction to this video was who are the parents of these kids? I would not want to be one of the parents of these kids because it's inappropriate for kids at this age to be dressing the way they did. I agree with the lady who said “I find this very disturbing” (Early Show) because they are to young.

    sincerely

    Vance Kamibayashi

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  61. Dear Dustin,
    i agree with what you said "then i realized they were just 7 years old, and too yound to even be trying to do these kinds of moves, its too innapropriate." beacuse its true

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  62. Dear Geordan,
    i agree with what you said "I then looked at the way they dressed and there age and realized it was inappropriate to be dressed like that." because at this age they shouldent be dressinglike that.
    sincerely,
    Vance Kamibayashi

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  63. Dear Ms.Carlson
    My reaction to this was " this makes me sick to see 7 year old girls doing what they were"
    i really think they are to young to do that on live tv

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  64. Dear vance
    I totaly agree with your statment

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  65. Dear georden
    I agree with you 'that this girls should not be dressed the way they are on the video'.

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  66. Dear Ms.Carlson
    This was a video of 7 year old girls showing to much skin for their age,it would have been much more appropriate if these little girls would have covered up more.

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